Hey Travis, thanks for sharing some things about yourself. I see that you really like rugby because you mention it twice in this piece of writing. To make it easier to read, think about putting separate ideas into different sentences. This will break up the text so that the reader can take a breath in the right places. Look forward to reading more of your writing in future.
Hello Travis, Great to hear some things about you, especially that like writing. Remember that part of the writing process is proof-reading. You could see where you need capitals.
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Hey Travis, thanks for sharing some things about yourself. I see that you really like rugby because you mention it twice in this piece of writing. To make it easier to read, think about putting separate ideas into different sentences. This will break up the text so that the reader can take a breath in the right places. Look forward to reading more of your writing in future.
ReplyDeleteHello Travis, Great to hear some things about you, especially that like writing. Remember that part of the writing process is proof-reading. You could see where you need capitals.
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Churr Travis, Great to hear new things about you. Its interesting that you have a lot of things to say about yourself
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ReplyDeleteI like your all about me because it tells me a lot about you but still keep personal info.
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