Hi Travis, good work on your poem. I wish I could read it all but the writing is small and the red words are difficult for me to read on the dark background area. Maybe next time, you could alter the size and colour of the words to make it easier (for old people like me) to read!
Hi Travis,My name is Jessica.I like this Poem and how you Described The Poor man a lot.But you have used the wrong words in some lines.Maybe you could check out my blog:http://pcsjessicab.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Travis, good work on your poem. I wish I could read it all but the writing is small and the red words are difficult for me to read on the dark background area. Maybe next time, you could alter the size and colour of the words to make it easier (for old people like me) to read!
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ReplyDeleteHi Travis,My name is Jessica.I like this Poem and how you Described The Poor man a lot.But you have used the wrong words in some lines.Maybe you could check out my blog:http://pcsjessicab.blogspot.co.nz/
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